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I can never end it good, I just can't think of how to end most of the stuff I write. It's like it keeps going on and on and there never is a proper ending that makes any sense. It's probably my biggest problem, I just don't have good ideas on how to end stories.
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Have you any particular stories you want help with finishing?
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Imitate opera and Shakespeare. Kill everyone.
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::Loads guns:: Where do I start?
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Write out a plot and outline before you fill in the storyline but Nicodemus Whateley's idea has merit. Dead or mad.
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i've never been able to do that outline method.. i change my mind too many times over the course of writing. but i can see how that's a good way to start, if you can't start
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maybe you can choose your ending when you start, then work towards it.
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I agree with grendelvs...try coming up with a really odd ending, and see what twists and turns you will need to get there.
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Like the narrorator finds out that he's been a miget this whole time?
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Like the door-to-door salesman who realizes he's a horse.

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that...that's EXACTLY what i meant.

i feel so at home.
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like that writer who felt like he was at home, only to discover that he never learned to read, and he's homeless
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um...
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word!
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JJ Burke wrote:like that writer who felt like he was at home, only to discover that he never learned to read, and he's homeless
And also, he's Batman.
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