In need of constructive criticism!

[mary]

I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading my papers/assignments that I have to write for my Biology class. My teacher complains about my level of English (not being very good) and I am quite determined to improve my skills. Also Science is my thing and I want to major in it for next year

I am not too sure if this is suitable enough to be under this forum section. If you are into the whole criticism/editing & revising/proof reading thing - please let me know and I will post it up here

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[terence]

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