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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 6:32 pm
by Jesus Prime
Lemme have it as a Word file, I'll fix her up G-E-W-D gewd.

Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 7:40 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
okay

Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 7:42 pm
by Jesus Prime
Is she a-coming?

Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 5:32 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
the word file?? i allready sent that to you...actually.... it was jus the words, so....yeah, work on it.

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:47 pm
by Jesus Prime
Yeah, I've about 500 or 600 words completely redone, but my main computer's all spy-wared up, so itll be a while before I get back to working on it. Does the name 'Kaylynn' need to be in it? I've replaced it with 'Octavia'.

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:01 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
okay, thats better

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:09 pm
by Jesus Prime
Yeah. It harkens back to Roman days, so it's more universal. Everyone knows a few Roman names (not necessarily Octavia Thuris Minor, though), but not so many people know a Kaylynn. Count yourself lucky, I nearly went with Fionuala.

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 5:25 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
also, remove most humor, and completeley rewrite the Minnotaur part.

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 7:20 pm
by Jesus Prime
I'm reading it as I rewrite it, I haven't gotten too far.

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 7:36 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
gah! 600 misspelled or bad grammar in just the first few parts????

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:26 pm
by Aleister
Spyware is horrible.. I work as a computer technician and I am always cleaning that junk up :)

A co-worker of mine wrote a nice little article up on cleaning it off. It would probably work nicely for you.

http://www.elitekiller.com/malware.htm

The problem with most of that stuff is that running a single anti-spyware program will usually not remove (anywhere close) to all of it. At work we usually run around 6 different programs, and go in and manually remove entries from the registry, etc.. :)

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2005 7:12 pm
by Jesus Prime
It's okay, I'm getting a professional in.
And just 600 words from th start, not 600 choice words. I'm rewriting it rather drastically.

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 6:23 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
ahh...err...okay.

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 6:56 pm
by Jesus Prime
Yeah, I'll be another while from getting on it, but I'll fix her up first chance I get.

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 6:33 pm
by Yog-Sothoth
okay, just quick... also, THE CTHULHU PUPPET CAME IN! ITS HIDIOUSLY ADORABLE!