Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 8:04 pm
Well upon reading the beginning I notice a stellar characterization, nice plot, but the writing itself could use some excitement. Not for content, but for fluency. All in all it was great work.
Hello, Tindalos. Welcome aboard.
Can I just ask you to resize your avatar? I didn't realise there were no size limits on it, but I'd say 150 x 150 would be about right.