dreams in the witch-house
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dreams in the witch-house
ok, i just read this one because it was brought up in the chaparral heights thread.. first thing: the 2 stories bear no resemblance to each other, which jp would have known if he had bothered to read my first draft.
personal projects aside, i have to say that i wasn't really blown away by this story. i mean the concepts are pretty interesting, but i never really had a knee-slapping moment of 'never saw that coming.' the narration has a couple of moments of recapping clues from earlier, but i pretty much got the point of all those clues the first time around. so there wasn't a hell of a lot of mystery, as i saw it.
anyway, it's still a decent story, and i wouldn't tell anyone to avoid it.
also, i might get the hankering to draw brown jenkin. i found some pictures in a google image search, and none of them are really how he looks in my head. also, i just like the name 'brown jenkin.' it sounds like it could be a lot of things.. a little ratty sidekick; a type of hat; an inadvisable mixed drink; something the hooker charges extra for..... such a versatile name
personal projects aside, i have to say that i wasn't really blown away by this story. i mean the concepts are pretty interesting, but i never really had a knee-slapping moment of 'never saw that coming.' the narration has a couple of moments of recapping clues from earlier, but i pretty much got the point of all those clues the first time around. so there wasn't a hell of a lot of mystery, as i saw it.
anyway, it's still a decent story, and i wouldn't tell anyone to avoid it.
also, i might get the hankering to draw brown jenkin. i found some pictures in a google image search, and none of them are really how he looks in my head. also, i just like the name 'brown jenkin.' it sounds like it could be a lot of things.. a little ratty sidekick; a type of hat; an inadvisable mixed drink; something the hooker charges extra for..... such a versatile name
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Re: dreams in the witch-house
I explained my logic in your thread.JJ Burke wrote:ok, i just read this one because it was brought up in the chaparral heights thread.. first thing: the 2 stories bear no resemblance to each other, which jp would have known if he had bothered to read my first draft.

About the rest, I liked it from an isnpiration standpoint, but reading it for the sake of just reading it, not a good idea.
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I thought it was a brilliant story. I mean, come on, bending dimensions through math and the occult? Can you ask for more? Nay! Espicially once you watch through this http://www.tenthdimension.com.nyud.net:8080/flash.php
Besides, Brown Jenkins is the only Lovecraft created 'thing' thats ever really scared me.
Besides, Brown Jenkins is the only Lovecraft created 'thing' thats ever really scared me.
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i know some places that could use a good heath blasting
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that's a nice presentation.. except the url didn't work for me. just go to tenthdimension.com
A monkey riding a dog is probably the awesomest thing that could ever happen.
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A Little More Colour
A fun take on this story is "A Little Color in Your Cheeks" by Mike Minnis. It appears in William Jones' Horrors Beyond.Pinonomicon wrote:The Colour Out Of Space is one of my favourite stories....
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